For years, Yalini has never understood where she belonged in life. Between being an orphan and being bullied at school, she thought she'd be anything but important. With the exclusion of her mysterious stone, of course, which always gave a weird vibe to her, along with a strange reoccurring dream, that she had every night. With the dream, and her stone, Yalini will begin to realize that there's a bigger...much bigger story that has yet to be told, and a new life awaiting on the other side...of a portal...?
This comic takes place several years after the events of Explorers of Sky. (Constructive criticism is also appreciated as well, since this is my first official comic! owo; )
Oh boy, I'm at the most recent page already?
Damn. I wanted to see what the school was like.
Also, that Snivy is so adorable, I want to hug her.
And Starsong. Starsong is adorable as well.
Despite things being all over the place sometimes, I do think it's a good thing because you're able to reveal certain plot points that could easily be seen as something to just pass off, but then later on they can be shown to be more important than people originally thought.
And the characters look really good, even the human.
Aside from the feet, which aren't the best sometimes, but I think you knew that.
And, well, practice makes perfect! :D